Pokemon: Starting from the different color Lalulas

The Silver Wind Chapter is over.

The style has not been changed, and it still does not conform to the routine of the Internet circle. The ending does not write anything about Xu Qiansu, but focuses on the Galar region that was poisoned by Wujitai... Many things have no results, and it seems to have no beginning and no end... But this is a transitional chapter.

It mainly writes about Ah Qiu's views on the "great trainer" that Xu Qiansu often talks about, that is, loving his own Pokémon is better than loving himself.

In addition, there is the old-fashioned knife problem, which has dissuaded many people.

I feel... This is really not a knife, at best, the plot is more realistic, and it focuses on the reality of people's hearts. It writes about the beauty of Pokémon that stands out behind these dark hearts.

Xu Qiansu's journey along the way is always accompanied by the dark side of people's hearts, conspiracy and death, and many tragedies, but in the final analysis, the point is not here.

The place he walked is full of bones, and the place he walked is also full of flowers (I think this sentence in the domestic independent game "Hessen Town Strange Story" is very suitable for Xu Qiansu, and it is also very suitable for the main theme of this book.)

Young Mianmian who has been waiting for a trainer who has not heard from him for a whole year, the little Kirby who protects human babies when the Gigamax energy dissipates, and the Kodak who silently guards the tombstone of his trainer... These are all "the beauty and purity of Pokémon" in my opinion.

If you see here, there are some book friends who think this is a dark plot, think that I am a young man, and I have nothing to do to torture readers... Then it can only be said that these book friends have no taste for this book, and they are not suitable for reading this book (in fact, the results also prove that this book is indeed only liked by a very small number of readers.)

However, Aqiu also felt that the writing of this volume was not very good. One was academic problems, and he could only spend about four hours a day typing in front of the notebook. Under the premise of maintaining quality, maintaining full attendance was already trying his best.

The second is that the poor grades still affect the mentality to some extent.

Many books with better grades than mine were cut directly, which made Aqiu really feel a bit sad, and his mood was complicated.

Although he said he didn't care about the grades and just wanted to finish, it was still impossible to not care about it at all.

But the writing is not good, the reason is that my level is not good.

There are many problems in this volume, mainly focusing on the plot.

Many readers were dissuaded because of the plot of winter camping. They thought that the plot of winter camping deviated from the style of the first volume, and there were fewer Pokémon stories.

I thought about it, and it does make sense.

The theme of this book is a travelogue of encounters and partings, and the focus is never on competitions, such cool plots as pretending to punch faces, even if it is writing competitions, the focus should still be on Pokémon, Xu Qiansu and Miss Mary.

At that time, I wrote this plot because I thought that there were too few combat elements in this book, 100% plot, 80% daily life, 10% commentary, and 10% combat.

But I didn't want to follow the trend and write those challenge contests that were tired of reading by book lovers, so I created a winter camping, and then I filled my brain with a lot of battle plots... In the original idea, I wrote this competition in my daily life, but the result was obviously not satisfactory.

The game is not well written, there are no ups and downs, and there is no desire for people to watch it. The daily life can only be regarded as unsatisfactory.

The bad follow-up made me realize that the plot was bad, so I hurriedly ended the winter camping.

The reason why routines are routines is that they are easy to use and easy to write.

I don't want to be routine, and I want to write well, but the result is obvious. With my writing skills, I can't write well.

It is a wise move to write the alliance contest and follow the gymnasium. It has a clear main line and room for original plots.

But when it comes to fighting, it also made me realize that, compared to a brain-stuffed fighting plot, a good plot is a battle that has a good atmosphere, a venue, and a taste.

I don’t know if you have read "The World Is Fierce", Guan Gongzi's work, Jichada once recommended it.

I think the writing method of "The Son Is Fierce" is worth learning, and the rhythm of daily life and battle is quite good.

The first order of Guan Guan's new book is 20,000, which is amazing. He also slowly climbed up step by step. As his book fan, I am really happy for him.

Pulled away again.

Even writing competitions and gym battles, which are common in Pokémon texts, are better than my original competition.

This volume itself still has some branch lines and main lines, but I just cut it off and ended it directly, and entered the next volume, which can be regarded as a fresh start... Focusing on Pokémon.

Don't be afraid of problems, as long as you can summarize.

In addition, there is the endlessly debated heroine issue.

In this volume, I focused on Lillie.

Writing Lillie was purely to solve her Pokémon phobia, and to use this to write about the relationship between Pokémon and the trainer, and it turned out that it was written like this.

But now that it's written like this, I don't hesitate.

This book has multiple heroines, and there are at most four heroines (with my writing ability, I can only write about four).

If you can't accept it, you can just leave. I don't want to stand on both sides, eat both sides, and cheat your money.

In Ah Qiu's view, the number of heroines is not a poisonous point in itself, but whether the writing is good or not is the key.

I wrote 400,000 words, and I think it is my rare and good place in the love story.

I will try my best to write well. (As a big book fan of Jicha, it seems that multiple heroines are a matter of course?)

However, given the current general environment, I implore book friends who despise many heroines to be merciful and not to report.

With the results of this book, once reported, the official will not guarantee... This book will be gone immediately.

above.

Oh, by the way, both the first volume and the second volume have very few words, and I want to write more in the third volume.

But Aqiu discovered that I am good at writing short stories, and I am good at writing long stories and writing about the story.

I hope the third volume will be well written.

The third chapter of Feng Hua Xue Yue, Cang Hua.

Finally, I would like to thank the book friends who have not given up on this book and have followed up all the way, thank you very much.